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muffled tears and handouts of cynicism

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it was a quiet,
rainy afternoon
when you showed me
how the frame
of your bones
turned from pillars
to ruins
in just four seconds.

you were bare
in every scaling inch
of skin, feathers
detached-
falling like stones
through the cobwebs
between the nooks and
crannies of my fingers

and you kept asking
for the two cents
in my pocket

when all I could give you
was my sympathy
and lashes wrapped
in an expanse of iris.

there are no tears,
there is rain
but no petrichor.
(5-31-13)

Inspired by a scope through :icontoxic-nebulae:'s gallery :love:
and a common sight in Philippine streets: poor sampaguita (white jasmines) garland vendors :tear:
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this is as bare and raw as it gets (that capitalized 'I' is what's written on paper, k?)

the 'and' in the title is supposed to be an ampersand, btw.

I should really stop with this lower case things, it's driving me nuts!

:bulletblue: imaginative-lioness's Literature Roadtrip: Day 06
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Chezzy-Am's avatar
:) I like this poem. Mostly because its sarcasm is so sharp... It honestly feels like... like the protagonist is being smacked around...

It basically is saying that the protagonist is given nothing worth talking about... because they mean nothing... their lives means nothing... the last three lines, evoke that realization...

Dark interpretation, but that's what I got... Its an opinion in the end...