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Literature Text
it occurs
like a bitter drug,
a blue star awake with
verse. but his
bones don't ache,
no, they never do.
paralysis.
a spine left in
stasis.
the remains of you
turned to nothing but
the scent of
overly-aged
mothballs.
piles
and piles
of dust.
metaphors
trapped
on the edges of
his teeth
and a rhapsody
billowing
in his skull.
his smile crooked
in a moonly manner.
the doldrums
forever trapped
in his lungs
as he burns and burns
and burns
his ways back
to being ash.
like a bitter drug,
a blue star awake with
verse. but his
bones don't ache,
no, they never do.
(yet they quiver;
disintegrate
with every quake)
paralysis.
a spine left in
stasis.
the remains of you
turned to nothing but
the scent of
overly-aged
mothballs.
piles
and piles
of dust.
metaphors
trapped
on the edges of
his teeth
and a rhapsody
billowing
in his skull.
his smile crooked
in a moonly manner.
the doldrums
forever trapped
in his lungs
as he burns and burns
and burns
his ways back
to being ash.
Literature
Hate
I hate
I hate well
I hate feverishly
I am the churning acid in your stomach
I am the blood pounding in your head
I am the white-knuckled fist clenching to strike
I am the red haze dimming your eyes
and clouding your mind
I am the rage that lashes out at the weak
the small and defenseless
justified by tears and fueled by alcohol
I hate passionately
I am the shaking in your hands
and grinding teeth
nails digging into your palms
I am everything you hate
boiling to the surface in a froth of
bile
blood
and excrement
I am the indiscriminate spray of bullets
at the school
church
nightclub
I am the madman raving on the news
heaping blame
Literature
just words
The truth is
I dont just miss you
I miss the person I am with you
I am different when you are here
I am different when you arent
Its not about being together
Or happily ever afters
Its about waking up and knowing
You are in my corner
There were a lot of truths in those last words
Tossing out that box of old hurts and regrets was necessary.
The problem is, there were other boxes
A friendship and trust that had developed
A bond that we didn't resurrect..but that we created and protected from everyone but ourselves
You are bigger than the puzzle piece
That fell out when you left
I am more than the sum of my parts
But Im not the answer I've b
Literature
imsorryican'tstoptellingyouhowmuchiloveyou
i can keep telling you i love you every day
but every time i do, i feel like i'm simultaneously losing
pieces of my heart.
you brush it off
like i don't mean anything to you.
like i never meant anything to you.
i wonder if i'll ever mean something to you again.
you said you knew what you wanted but
i know whatever it is no longer includes me.
and i know myself; i'm weak when it comes to you so
even though i've been thinking lately about how i
wont be foolish enough to fall back
in love with you
not even all that deep down, i'm sure
that i will.
but i can't keep telling you i love you every day.
because every time i do, i'm losing mor
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Yup, I'm in love with lowercase...again =_=
For the
I'm thinking about changing 'bitter' to 'bitterly' to make it read a bit better aloud. What do you think? Crazy?
How is it overall? Too cliche?
I'm having a problem with merging lines, so does 'verse' have to be separate with 'awake with' or do they have to be put together?
For the
I'm thinking about changing 'bitter' to 'bitterly' to make it read a bit better aloud. What do you think? Crazy?
How is it overall? Too cliche?
I'm having a problem with merging lines, so does 'verse' have to be separate with 'awake with' or do they have to be put together?
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I was just thinking yes. yes. yes. while reading this. Kriztin this is really something.
"a blue star awake with
verse."
"a spine left in
stasis."
"his smile crooked
in a moonly manner."
moonly manner just agh I love it. take me now.
"a blue star awake with
verse."
"a spine left in
stasis."
"his smile crooked
in a moonly manner."
moonly manner just agh I love it. take me now.