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I was the unexpected,
that I admit
I also admit
that after almost seventeen
years of trying and believing
I understand nothing
other than the reasons
why you're my mother
It's a struggle
to be so different
from the woman
everyone loves
with utmost respect
to be that comparison
no one expects
to come out from
something so beautiful
But the greatest struggle
of all, mother,
is how hard I try
to ignore that ten-year
gap between us without
removing the curiosity
I had so many questions
while you were away,
and still do-
but the more I ask
the less I understand
The phone call from far away
when I was ten
The big, white house
and everyone in it
The pack of lies
and frustration
I have to swallow,
pretending I'm a ghost
It's a fact that I'm different
in this roof because everyone
understands you but me
I'm not the child
you think I was
am
or will be
and I have to grow up
but I can tell
how much
neither of us
wants it yet
how can I move on
when there's something
missing?
the arguments
can't form
through speech
because I'm so tired
of being angry-
so, so angry about everything
but the only reason
why I try so hard
to let it all go
is because I love you
In the sixth grade,
I turned rebellious
to get rid of you
but couldn't go on,
realizing I could not
and can not imagine
a life without you
and now that
I'm going to college,
I'm doubting if
it's worth it
to sacrifice something
good
for something so
favorable
to you
I'm very, very confused
and broken-at-heart
at the same time
but know that
I have never been
against you
and I know
I am hard to understand
I don't know where
I am or what
I want anymore
but please bear with me
Sometimes,
I do what I can
to open my heart
to you
but no matter what,
you're too persistent
no, I am not condemning
you,
I just have difficulty
understanding
I hope that there
would be a day
when there are no
secrets between
us
and that I could
open my heart
without
hesitation
for now,
my love as a daughter
is nothing
bu acceptance
please
forgive me
that I admit
I also admit
that after almost seventeen
years of trying and believing
I understand nothing
other than the reasons
why you're my mother
It's a struggle
to be so different
from the woman
everyone loves
with utmost respect
to be that comparison
no one expects
to come out from
something so beautiful
But the greatest struggle
of all, mother,
is how hard I try
to ignore that ten-year
gap between us without
removing the curiosity
I had so many questions
while you were away,
and still do-
but the more I ask
the less I understand
The phone call from far away
when I was ten
The big, white house
and everyone in it
The pack of lies
and frustration
I have to swallow,
pretending I'm a ghost
It's a fact that I'm different
in this roof because everyone
understands you but me
I'm not the child
you think I was
am
or will be
and I have to grow up
but I can tell
how much
neither of us
wants it yet
how can I move on
when there's something
missing?
the arguments
can't form
through speech
because I'm so tired
of being angry-
so, so angry about everything
but the only reason
why I try so hard
to let it all go
is because I love you
In the sixth grade,
I turned rebellious
to get rid of you
but couldn't go on,
realizing I could not
and can not imagine
a life without you
and now that
I'm going to college,
I'm doubting if
it's worth it
to sacrifice something
good
for something so
favorable
to you
I'm very, very confused
and broken-at-heart
at the same time
but know that
I have never been
against you
and I know
I am hard to understand
I don't know where
I am or what
I want anymore
but please bear with me
Sometimes,
I do what I can
to open my heart
to you
but no matter what,
you're too persistent
no, I am not condemning
you,
I just have difficulty
understanding
I hope that there
would be a day
when there are no
secrets between
us
and that I could
open my heart
without
hesitation
for now,
my love as a daughter
is nothing
bu acceptance
please
forgive me
Literature
Hate
I hate
I hate well
I hate feverishly
I am the churning acid in your stomach
I am the blood pounding in your head
I am the white-knuckled fist clenching to strike
I am the red haze dimming your eyes
and clouding your mind
I am the rage that lashes out at the weak
the small and defenseless
justified by tears and fueled by alcohol
I hate passionately
I am the shaking in your hands
and grinding teeth
nails digging into your palms
I am everything you hate
boiling to the surface in a froth of
bile
blood
and excrement
I am the indiscriminate spray of bullets
at the school
church
nightclub
I am the madman raving on the news
heaping blame
Literature
winter
i didn't think that the artificial fireplace logs
would turn out to be
some kind of cruel metaphor
but here i am,
trying to ingest antifreeze to
deal with the shivers you i
send across
raw clinging collarbones , d
own
clanking vertebrae screaming at me to
let go or i'll melt into your
chest like the snowflake that lost its 6th
arm
and you
know that's not how it works and
i do too.
i turn around
and realize that
you
' re not beside
me, anymore
Literature
attempts
this afternoon
unresponsive to the sunlight
lying in bed like summer afternoons and white sheets
still moments in our room
so quiet i can hear your ribcage shifting with each breath
but winter -
winter is coming,
the air is so cold,
my bones break inside.
your remove yourself from me,
turn your head away,
hand slipping out of mine,
curling into yourself.
this morning
waking up to brightness outside
the crisp air is singing with potential but
i am quiet
i am inside
i am by myself on this big bed.
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May 11, 2014
Edited May 16, 2014- fixed some stuff and added some stuff (wow, I didn't know crying while editing was possible).
Belated Happy Mother's Day to everyone out there. This is far from the sweet, heartfelt kind usually given to devoted mothers.
I curse my instincts of editing after writing this, and no matter what I do there never seems to be a replacement for the cliches here because I'm a big ball of cliche and this is as honest as it gets. I thought poetry about my grandfather was bad for my heart, but when I wrote this in the middle of the night I cried so hard I ran out of tears. It does sound like my mom did what you'd think it would sound like and I wish I could tell you otherwise but even I'm confused myself. I don't know. The phone is fishy but the house isn't-wait I take that back. Here's the full story (caution. really long):
When I was three my mom left the country to work in Japan. My childhood was filled with phone calls and a mother who could only stay for one week every two months, and even that's tentative. In one point, there were two straight years without a phone call or a visit. Then one day, when I was in fourth grade, the phone rang and my mom wasn't there. Neither was my dad or grandmother, and my brother was asleep. I picked it up then this old woman was on the other line asking for Monica. Monica isn't my mother's name, but she told me everyone in Japan called her that so I rolled with it and knew what she meant. I told her my mom wasn't around (but she was in the Philippines), then she asked if I was her daughter, clearly shocked while whispering to other voices in Japanese. I said yes then she put down the phone. Confused, I asked my mom about it. But instead of answering, she got mad at me- saying how I ruined everything and how going back to Japan would be a complete disaster because of what I've done. I was aghast because I didn't know what she was talking about. Afterwards, I heard she wasn't doing so well at work back in Japan. I literally spent two years crying at most nights wondering what I did wrong because I was both hurt and clueless about everything. What did I do? Did I say something wrong?
I finally got the answer when I got so fed up with it I slightly rebelled in the sixth grade, which is really easy when you're a bright, cheeky honor student in the Philippines buried in books. I didn't need heavy eyeliner or alcohol, I just needed to swear and talk back to my mom in front of her friends and that was level 10. I know I sound kind of horrible back then but this was all because my mother would not explain everything. She was hurt-clearly. That's when she explained everything-sort of. She told me that she lied about not having a daughter in Japan so her clients wouldn't adopt me. Does it make sense? I don't think it does either. I did try to exert effort in explaining this bit before asking but the more I did, the more confused I got myself.
Eventually, we moved to Antipolo when this big, white house she proposed was finished. Again, I was aghast because the building (which is also the house I'm in now) is HUGE! I mean it, I am not bragging in anyway because I'm not in any way proud of it sadly. I asked her where the money came from but all she told me was "street smarts and clever decisions." Whatever the hell that means. You would probably think that she answered maybe a few questions, but no. Her answers were questions themselves. Until now she still thinks that I went back to being that sweet, innocent honor student I was when I was a kid - obviously not anymore. She sugar coats and diverts every single time. It's so UNBELIEVABLE!
I know she's my mother and I probably should try to understand but how can I when it all just doesn't make any sense? I want to. I really, desperately want to, but I can't. I've tried opening up to her about this but same old, same old sugar coat. you may think I hate my mom but I don't. I love my mother so much and I appreciate the roads she's been through just for us but it's sad when she's too persistent and stubborn to tell me just how far she went and what road she took. Until now it isn't over. We have her Japanese clients visit our building and I am really perplexed about it.
I tried heart to heart but it's hard. See, this is what happens when you don't open up and let your kids be fully involved in whatever you're doing. They just end up as frustrated and angry as I do. You may think it's for their safety, but from my perspective and experience you're leading that kid to a point of no return-a big, complex maze he/she can't get out of.
Edited May 16, 2014- fixed some stuff and added some stuff (wow, I didn't know crying while editing was possible).
Belated Happy Mother's Day to everyone out there. This is far from the sweet, heartfelt kind usually given to devoted mothers.
I curse my instincts of editing after writing this, and no matter what I do there never seems to be a replacement for the cliches here because I'm a big ball of cliche and this is as honest as it gets. I thought poetry about my grandfather was bad for my heart, but when I wrote this in the middle of the night I cried so hard I ran out of tears. It does sound like my mom did what you'd think it would sound like and I wish I could tell you otherwise but even I'm confused myself. I don't know. The phone is fishy but the house isn't-wait I take that back. Here's the full story (caution. really long):
When I was three my mom left the country to work in Japan. My childhood was filled with phone calls and a mother who could only stay for one week every two months, and even that's tentative. In one point, there were two straight years without a phone call or a visit. Then one day, when I was in fourth grade, the phone rang and my mom wasn't there. Neither was my dad or grandmother, and my brother was asleep. I picked it up then this old woman was on the other line asking for Monica. Monica isn't my mother's name, but she told me everyone in Japan called her that so I rolled with it and knew what she meant. I told her my mom wasn't around (but she was in the Philippines), then she asked if I was her daughter, clearly shocked while whispering to other voices in Japanese. I said yes then she put down the phone. Confused, I asked my mom about it. But instead of answering, she got mad at me- saying how I ruined everything and how going back to Japan would be a complete disaster because of what I've done. I was aghast because I didn't know what she was talking about. Afterwards, I heard she wasn't doing so well at work back in Japan. I literally spent two years crying at most nights wondering what I did wrong because I was both hurt and clueless about everything. What did I do? Did I say something wrong?
I finally got the answer when I got so fed up with it I slightly rebelled in the sixth grade, which is really easy when you're a bright, cheeky honor student in the Philippines buried in books. I didn't need heavy eyeliner or alcohol, I just needed to swear and talk back to my mom in front of her friends and that was level 10. I know I sound kind of horrible back then but this was all because my mother would not explain everything. She was hurt-clearly. That's when she explained everything-sort of. She told me that she lied about not having a daughter in Japan so her clients wouldn't adopt me. Does it make sense? I don't think it does either. I did try to exert effort in explaining this bit before asking but the more I did, the more confused I got myself.
Eventually, we moved to Antipolo when this big, white house she proposed was finished. Again, I was aghast because the building (which is also the house I'm in now) is HUGE! I mean it, I am not bragging in anyway because I'm not in any way proud of it sadly. I asked her where the money came from but all she told me was "street smarts and clever decisions." Whatever the hell that means. You would probably think that she answered maybe a few questions, but no. Her answers were questions themselves. Until now she still thinks that I went back to being that sweet, innocent honor student I was when I was a kid - obviously not anymore. She sugar coats and diverts every single time. It's so UNBELIEVABLE!
I know she's my mother and I probably should try to understand but how can I when it all just doesn't make any sense? I want to. I really, desperately want to, but I can't. I've tried opening up to her about this but same old, same old sugar coat. you may think I hate my mom but I don't. I love my mother so much and I appreciate the roads she's been through just for us but it's sad when she's too persistent and stubborn to tell me just how far she went and what road she took. Until now it isn't over. We have her Japanese clients visit our building and I am really perplexed about it.
I tried heart to heart but it's hard. See, this is what happens when you don't open up and let your kids be fully involved in whatever you're doing. They just end up as frustrated and angry as I do. You may think it's for their safety, but from my perspective and experience you're leading that kid to a point of no return-a big, complex maze he/she can't get out of.
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i read this piece, and i read your description
and my heart hurts a lot. the worst thing a person can be left with
is questions unanswered. i know, i usually take it SO far to satisfy my curiosity
cause i can't deal with it. i can't even possibly imagine how exhausting this life and experience has been for you.
you're such a smart girl, and i love your words
and you're so, so beautiful. hang on to yourself and be patient my love,
the answer might not be ready for you yet.
and my heart hurts a lot. the worst thing a person can be left with
is questions unanswered. i know, i usually take it SO far to satisfy my curiosity
cause i can't deal with it. i can't even possibly imagine how exhausting this life and experience has been for you.
you're such a smart girl, and i love your words
and you're so, so beautiful. hang on to yourself and be patient my love,
the answer might not be ready for you yet.