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the dissonance between your words
string themselves together
to a declaration-
you can't heal
what you've broken;
newborn sunlight drenched in paper-pressed
skin and the flames of dawn
cupped in soft-doe eyes
hands trying to reach the sun
bathed in fragmented skies
and the plea for
a rhapsody in reverse
resting on bones trying to rattle
moon-carved gods loose...
string themselves together
to a declaration-
you can't heal
what you've broken;
newborn sunlight drenched in paper-pressed
skin and the flames of dawn
cupped in soft-doe eyes
hands trying to reach the sun
bathed in fragmented skies
and the plea for
a rhapsody in reverse
resting on bones trying to rattle
moon-carved gods loose...
- and you've realized that you've tried.
Literature
Hate
I hate
I hate well
I hate feverishly
I am the churning acid in your stomach
I am the blood pounding in your head
I am the white-knuckled fist clenching to strike
I am the red haze dimming your eyes
and clouding your mind
I am the rage that lashes out at the weak
the small and defenseless
justified by tears and fueled by alcohol
I hate passionately
I am the shaking in your hands
and grinding teeth
nails digging into your palms
I am everything you hate
boiling to the surface in a froth of
bile
blood
and excrement
I am the indiscriminate spray of bullets
at the school
church
nightclub
I am the madman raving on the news
heaping blame
Literature
imsorryican'tstoptellingyouhowmuchiloveyou
i can keep telling you i love you every day
but every time i do, i feel like i'm simultaneously losing
pieces of my heart.
you brush it off
like i don't mean anything to you.
like i never meant anything to you.
i wonder if i'll ever mean something to you again.
you said you knew what you wanted but
i know whatever it is no longer includes me.
and i know myself; i'm weak when it comes to you so
even though i've been thinking lately about how i
wont be foolish enough to fall back
in love with you
not even all that deep down, i'm sure
that i will.
but i can't keep telling you i love you every day.
because every time i do, i'm losing mor
Literature
If the only words I have are I love you
If every day we're born,
and every night we die,
then imprint me in your first morn,
and here beside me lie.
If time will stay for just one day,
and every minute laughter rife,
then walk with me and not astray,
and share with me your life.
If time has brought you naught but harm-
has done naught but make you cry,
come fade here into my arms,
and here beside me die.
For here I stand as witness
to both your darkness and your light,
and happy company I am to confess
both "Good Morning" and "Goodnight
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Aubade-a morning love song (as opposed to a serenade, which is in the evening), or a song or poem about lovers separating at dawn.
Title could be changed sooner or later.
Does dissonance and god fit in the poem?
How are the line breaks so far? Anything out of place (I keep fumbling around with it)?
In need of length or leave it as is?
Any words that feel out of place?
Are the line breaks ok or should I do I do something about it?
Have a nice day!
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ITU Feature 14 + V-Challenge Winner - March 27, 2013
~imaginative-lioness' journal
Aubade-a morning love song (as opposed to a serenade, which is in the evening), or a song or poem about lovers separating at dawn.
Title could be changed sooner or later.
Does dissonance and god fit in the poem?
How are the line breaks so far? Anything out of place (I keep fumbling around with it)?
In need of length or leave it as is?
Any words that feel out of place?
Are the line breaks ok or should I do I do something about it?
Have a nice day!
EDIT
Featured in:
ITU Feature 14 + V-Challenge Winner - March 27, 2013
~imaginative-lioness' journal
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There's an awful lot of beauty in this one. I'm not going to answer your questions specifically, but I will say that everything about this feels "right" the way it is (which should answer those questions anyway).
hands trying to reach the sun
bathed in fragmented skies
*swoon*
hands trying to reach the sun
bathed in fragmented skies
*swoon*